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…showed last 75 words of 524 total…public, listen more to the public, and be more willing to change based on these suggestions and communications. * Would fixing the incentives be enough? I do not think the author considered this question * What remains to be done to make this an excellent paper? After the author lists the proposals, I think that an explanation of the incentives and the proposals made by this author would make a good paper a little better. ------------------------------------------------------------------------ **Bibliography**